Messed

Pretty butterflies.

The pain of thinking
Overwhelms me every time
I want you to die

Reviews

[Kerri Hart]

Even when I leave this page, these three lines haunt me in a sort of way a poem never has. Well written.
-K.J. Pennington

[Xanthous Crow]

Thank you. The praise is most appreciated, especially coming from a phenomenal writer such as yourself. I am glad you enjoyed!

[Kerri Hart]

i thought im supposed to be complimenting u!
Thank you :)
and the praise is well deserved
keep up the amazing writing!
-K.J. Pennington

[Relic]

That's not the first time anyone has said that to me. hahaha

This does have a haunting feel to it though. Kind of scary.

[Xanthous Crow]

Hah! I seem to get it a lot, too. And I say it more than I should.... which culminated into this. I am pleased! I enjoy it when people derive any emotion out of my writing, be it fear or anger or happiness or hatred. It shows me I'm doing something right. Thank you :)

[Relic]

You're welcome.