WHAT HAS GONE WRONG

WHAT HAS GONE WRONG

A Poem by Martin Addison
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This poem provokes the reader to think about the ironic nature of the problems or social ills of different spheres of our social lives.

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Where did we go wrong?

Did we put our treasury in the hands of pilferers and larcenists?

How come manslayers and assassins were put in charge of our security?

Can the wolf be our shepherd?

Why did we ask atheists and nihilists to lead our churches?

Isn’t it a head-scratcher that some nation wreckers rather became national leaders?

Isn’t it also puzzling that the medical Doctor was asked to manage the mortuary while the diener (morgue worker) goes to the medical consulting room?

Can our women find love in celebrated Casanova’s?

Oh...how could we leave our cherished kids in the care of paedophiles?

Does it really make sense for benighted personalities to head our academic institutions?

Something must be going wrong!

10/03/22
Martin A. Addison
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© 2022 Martin Addison


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Oh yes, something did go wrong and you said it clearly in your words.
Not sure if I would classify your words as a poem. It feels more like a statement. A big question for all to read and understand.
Yes, things need to be done about all you said. And, with hope and love I do believe that changes can be made.
Interesting line in-between all your lines.. "Can a wolf be our shepherd?"...The old saying goes.. a wolf hiding in sheeps clothing...so my immediate answer is no...
This is something that many are not aware of..Especially the young. Hopefully, the young are protected by their parents..but that doesn't always happen..
I respect views and find them interesting...
Lisa, now in Spain


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

You are most welcome...
Really hoping you understood what I was saying...
Lisa, now in.. read more
Martin Addison

2 Years Ago

Of course, I do. Your comments very much on point. I am learning🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Fantastic.. We are always learning...hopefully..
Lisa



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We need better Leaders. We need problem solvers, we need leaders with compassion who will do their best for the people they serve. Sadly that is not happening, and in some parts of our world it is far worse than others. There is corruption everywhere. It isn't impossible to correct. Pleased to stop by and read you today.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Martin Addison

2 Years Ago

Absolutely. Thanks for reading🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

You are welcome. Have a good day.
Martin Addison

2 Years Ago

Enjoy your day too
There is much wrong in the world, I must agree. We are all human, and as such we all make mistakes, but there are many things we could easily improve upon if we collectively applied ourselves. A thought-provoking write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Martin Addison

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
Oh yes, something did go wrong and you said it clearly in your words.
Not sure if I would classify your words as a poem. It feels more like a statement. A big question for all to read and understand.
Yes, things need to be done about all you said. And, with hope and love I do believe that changes can be made.
Interesting line in-between all your lines.. "Can a wolf be our shepherd?"...The old saying goes.. a wolf hiding in sheeps clothing...so my immediate answer is no...
This is something that many are not aware of..Especially the young. Hopefully, the young are protected by their parents..but that doesn't always happen..
I respect views and find them interesting...
Lisa, now in Spain


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

You are most welcome...
Really hoping you understood what I was saying...
Lisa, now in.. read more
Martin Addison

2 Years Ago

Of course, I do. Your comments very much on point. I am learning🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Fantastic.. We are always learning...hopefully..
Lisa

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Martin Addison
Martin Addison

Accra, Greater Accra, Ghana



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A Christian by way of spirituality. I have a generalist approach to intellectual interests but hold a bias for the social sciences and humanities. Not only do I believe in great ideas that are of esse.. more..

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