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So familiar you are. A face I have yet to survey with my own eyes. A millennia of moments elapsed since we stood in one another's aura..felt each others skin, heard your voice. A friendship which irradiated our journey together; proved to be amazing in itself. As One, luxuriating in societies taboo and unmentionables..as One, we found the essence of our union, us two. Tasted life's sweet drink with once thirsty tongues. Ways parted for awhile..a lifetime or two. And here you are, like you were away on business for a few days.. To feel your presence again, an abundance of emotions flowed like a river over, into and through my soul. Hesitation to get close to you..a robust energy holding keys to rapturous memoirs. Invoking happiness coupled with fear of "what happens if we do this again?" You have awoken inside of me, my muse with your solitary presence. Imagine what your touch will create. Dream is only what I can of that that lay ahead. A beautiful dream it is, one who took its first breathe of life when I saw you again.

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[Glen Yumang Manese]

So familiar you are. A face I have yet to survey with my own eyes. A millennia of moments elapsed since we stood in one another's aura..felt each others skin, heard your voice. A friendship which irradiated our journey together; proved to be amazing in itself. As One, luxuriating in societies taboo and unmentionables..as One, we found the essence of our union, us two. Tasted life's sweet drink with once thirsty tongues. Ways parted for awhile..a lifetime or two. And here you are, like you were away on business for a few days.. To feel your presence again, an abundance of emotions flowed like a river over, into and through my soul. Hesitation to get close to you..a robust energy holding keys to rapturous memoirs. Invoking happiness coupled with fear of "what happens if we do this again?" You have awoken inside of me, my muse with your solitary presence. Imagine what your touch will create. Dream is only what I can of that that lay ahead. A beautiful dream it is, one who took its first breathe of life when I saw you again.
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So familiar you are. A face I have yet to survey with my own eyes. A millennia of moments elapsed since we stood in one another's aura. Felt each other’s skin, heard our voices. A friendship which irradiated our journey together; proved to be amazing in itself. As One, luxuriating in societies taboo and unmentionables. As One, we found the essence of our union, us two. Tasted life's sweet drink with once thirsty tongues. Ways parted for a while. A lifetime or two. And here you are, like you were away on business for a few days...To feel your presence again, an abundance of emotions flowed like a river over, into and through my soul. Hesitation to get close to you. A robust energy holding keys to rapturous memoirs. Invoking happiness coupled with fear of "what happens if we do this again?" You have awoken inside of me, my muse with your solitary presence. Imagine what your touch will create. Dream is only what I can of that that lay ahead. A beautiful dream it is, one who took its first breath of life when I saw you again.

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I had a quick edit of this...for you...give it a touch...yet I may of missed even more...since this is untitled...and seems a rough draft...and copy and paste and see where this goes type of writes...it opens a lot of doors...not just in the read --- but in a continuation to this narrative...or not...depends where you're going with it...or just like I said --- throwing it out there...the person in your life has again appeared back in his/her stumping ground...seems there was a bond and you went separate ways for a time...a long time...but that spark in your eye is now burning...will it continue where it left off or is there a different route this time around...

[MJ]

Grammatically imperfect, but honestly the content of your writes are so enjoyable!

You know it's funny that you should write about this. For the longest time I used to feel that there was someone I had forgotten from many lifetimes, travelling together through space and time. The name escapes me, but it is definitely an old feeling...of someone I used to know.

But back to the point, your story. Well written and captivating.

[AtlantisLuna]

I see where you made the edits. I appreciate your thoughts. :)
I used the dots to show pause, the way you leave your mouth open after a sentence and you are giving the look of emotion that goes with the words you said immediately before. Make sense?

I am not yet sure where I will take this, continue or leave it as it be. I had honestly not thought about carrying it on, but I do like the idea! It is a rather lovely idea, I will ponder on it. Thank you ^_^