Quiet Regret

 

another

bruised

cold

dream

each

faint

ghost

haunts

innocence

just

kindles

love's

mettle

now

only

pangs

quiet

regret

stolen

time

undermines

virtue

while

xenogamy

yields

zilch

Reviews

[Amor-de-angel]

Smarty pants....
I did know what xenogamy meant.... good one AC

[Ivory]

I enjoyed the use of one word at a time. Each one holds it own meaning, yet flows together perfectly.
Very creative piece. I really liked it : )

[lowena]

Your too clever for your own good :)

another
bruised
cold
dream

- loved that bit especially.

[Athena Marie]

I didn't even realize this was the alphabet at first. I just thought it was a beautiful collection of words strung together to speak a sliver of sad truth from the authors soul. Now that I see it's the alphabet I realize it's really quite clever as well. I do need to grab my dictionary though... xenogamy? Hmmm...

[Kristina Moulaison]

This is deep and whimsical at the same time and a clever combination of words without being A-Z. Nicely done.

[Requiem]

The only problem I have with this is the beat of it. I'm not sure of how it's supposed to read in my head. Where to pause in it. Otherwise, excellent job of it (took me a while to figure out how xenogamy fit in it).

[J. Hampton]

Excellent
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clever ....

Blessssssss

[Lydia Breakfast]

Simple rhythms with complex ideas unfolding upon themselves; more than clever, you managed to work in xenogamy, I'm speechless!

[Lydia Shutter]

So talented! "stolen time undermines virtue" wonderful line! I liked the staccato effect the one word lines created. Great work here. Lydia

[[TaTo]� The Wolf]

Fantastic.

[Gandré]

yes this is the nicest experiment on a-z project.

nicely done. loved it. i mean it. xx.