You Made Me Feel So Alone

You Made Me Feel So Alone

A Poem by Rachel Shield

A sudden heavy burden
Has lodge itself inside my chest
I'm having trouble breathing

Tears falling down 
But I conceal them
Moment of weakness

I'm waiting for a reply
Not a seen from you
But that's all I'll ever get

Trying my best not to break down
but I'm tired...
Should I give up on you? 

© 2016 Rachel Shield


Author's Note

Rachel Shield
Written in a cold night... I'm a little unhinged today. Please bear with me

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This feeling described here is understandable and relatable. When we think that a loved one is ignoring us, the thought of giving up is what comes in mind. Beautifully written ☺

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rachel Shield

8 Years Ago

I'm glad you like it. :)
Dr. YumnaKay

8 Years Ago

The pleasure was mine ☺

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Rachel Shield
Rachel Shield

Tanay, Region IV-A, Philippines



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I'm a college student from the Philippines. Ever since I was a kid, I grew to love writing. And it continued up to this day. Now I'm currently writing two original stories, three fan fictions a.. more..

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