It's So Sad It Seems

War has ended that day

The reality of it would toss and turn,

and the war memories would burn,

it was all over,

the ghost thought sadly,

with a feeling of immense loss,

he thought peace was false,

war was retiring,

the guns had ceased firing,

families would no longer shed tears,

there would be no more dark fears,

world war ended that day,

so the ghost just floated away

from the haunted battle field,

dropped his sword and shield,

left behind the crooked willow,

the flawed dreams,

there would be no more blood

filling the red rivers and streams,

now the Garden would have silence,

oddly, it’s so sad it seems.

Reviews

[Sean45]

This is a sad write, a write straight from the heart. The words you write are all true.

[cfix]

This is such a sad write, wonderfully expressed. Like the flow of the write.

[Khaaki]

So very true and truth is always bitter... good one Frank

[Jeff]

A very sad write.

[Liza]

it does seem sad...the darkness we fight out....to get to the light somehow...
excellent write.