Breathing Air

Breathing Air

A Poem by Frank F. Atanacio
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Just a sad picture

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Memories on crib mattresses,

a bouncing baby boy,

surrounded by stuffed animals

which brought so much joy,

her mind went off like fire alarms,

then a tiny body in the arms

of a grieving mother,

so much fear came near,

help wasn’t there,

she couldn’t understand

and there was no reason why

her baby had just stopped breathing air.

© 2010 Frank F. Atanacio


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This is tragic and heartbreaking. Your description of the baby surrounded by stuffed animals really was a great use of imagery. A woman who loses a child never heals. Great work , you nailed it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


SIDS is a horrible thing for a mother.

Aptly done, my friend, on such a heartbreaking subject.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Frank F. Atanacio
Frank F. Atanacio

Shelton, CT



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