Heaven Cries

Heaven Cries

A Poem by Frank F. Atanacio
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Religion Lies

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God cleared his throat,

leaned forward in his chair,

ghosts would float,

death would fear,

chills would grin wickedly,

religion lies,

evil ties,

Heaven cries,

God tries,

as Humanity fails,

Jesus would cover his eyes,

if it weren’t for the nails.

© 2009 Frank F. Atanacio


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oh wow... You seem like a dark writer. This one is epic! Once again your last two lines got me... why are you so good with concluding lines? guess I'll never know, but I really like it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


ghosts would float,
death would fear

God ... the Supreme of the worlds...
these lines clearly depict them...
a very nice and interesting read..

:) Love,
Krishna

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Frank F. Atanacio
Frank F. Atanacio

Shelton, CT



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I'm a fun-loving person who loves sports, baseball, and football, and enjoy writing I love writing my Nick PT Barnum Mystery Novels... New One Out Now When The Kingdom Comes God Will Understand.. Che.. more..

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