Cataclysm Of Light

A plane is going down....

 

First,

there was an exploding sound,

everyone looked around,

then the plane was going down,

the captain heard

his co-pilot utter a curse word,

but before he could take another breath,

and prepare himself for death,

the plane exploded in a cataclysm of light and sound,

and moments later,

only debris hit the ground.

Reviews

[Martina]

Cool, I really like this, my favourite line was

"the plane exploded in a cataclysm of light and sound,
and moments later,
only debris hit the ground."

It really took me there, great job!

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

Wow Frank! You painted a picture in my head. Well done. Really took me there.

Cheers!
FF

[Robert Francis Callaci]

Great visual language -I could see myself in that moment- a fast paced well crafted piece-

my warmest
bob

[Cherry Berry]

I have read this on recently... It was still a great read, and as I said before... That is why I do not get on planes. That would be my luck. lol Well penned...

xoxox
Cherri

[Anastasia Starlena]

Isn't Ironic? lol...
Great piece!