God's Eyes, Grim

Sadness, Drama, God

 

"Wake up, humanity!"

God cries,

his eyes

opened to the dreariness of the world,

his dream evaporated,

replaced by the nightmare called war,

God’s eyes,

grim,

it’s like humans assaulting him,

wishing to return to his dream,

as he hears humanity scream,

bombs bursting in air,

the dead everywhere,

as a chill washed across his face,

it was a disgrace,

love was certainly misplaced,

fear of destruction,

loomed near,

the angels cry, that he could hear,

as terror was replaced by hellish actions,

God closed his eyes

and fought back the urge to swear,

he still cries,

then he would stare,

finally after withdrawing his glare,

he bows his head and prays,

that humanity changes their ways.

Reviews

[kelsey]

wow talk about touching the heart dearly... i will say that i am religious so a poem that includes war and terroists and god, but makes it easier to see what is happening before everyone's eyes including Gods eyes.
Amazing, truely amazing

[Robert Francis Callaci]

A great message Poem- Free will is Mans Lot- decreed by God-"Wake up, humanity" "he bows his head and prays, that humanity change their ways" It's all in Mans hands and we've made one fine mess of it- -I enjoyed this this ...


my warmest
bob