God Summarized

War Between Heaven and Hell Continues

The scene distorted,

the image contorted,

light shaded,

time complicated,

haunting night,

strong enough

to distort light.

God Summarized,

as he thought about evacuating the planet,

it would be wrong,

it could take very long,

but it would save civilization,

from the devil’s invasion.

The devil’s yellow light of destruction missed,

the bomb passed the earth and sizzled,

lost its power and fizzled,

God had moved the whole planet,

so the distort, contort,

was simply a divine plan,

to fool the devil,

and to save Man.

Reviews

[Angel Baby]

Found this a very interesting read, one I enjoyed very much. Light vs Dark is always appealing....well done! P.W.

[tinalouise]

Your natural rhythm made this a delight to read and visually I saw the tug between dark and light and the chaos between the two. I tripped just once in the piece and that was on the lines:

as he thought about evacuating the planet,
it would be wrong,
it could take very long,

...this might just be me though :)

Possibly our individual versions of 'God' (I call my version 'creator) may differ - but I see the same scenes playing out and the same triumph when all is done... you desribed it well.

Namaste,
Tina

Namaste,
Tina'