Frozen Horror

The Battle Between Heaven and Hell continues...

 

Hostile,

and angering nations,

the dark winged angel was bent

on destroying entire civilizations,

genocide is what he wanted and darkness is what he sent,

the Earth hung limply in space,

crying, as the dark winged angel was set on

eliminating the Human Race.

The sun still active and glowing,

but wish it could hide,

behind the clouds and winds that were blowing,

away from the battle between Heaven and Hell,

as darkness fell,

it lost its pride,

but it would have taken the mortals’ side.

It shined harmlessly, and hopelessly,

as the other planets simply watched in frozen horror,

as the earth was showered in total terror,

as the dark winged angel rained, pain,

and attacked with darkness that drove humans insane,

the violence strangled the planet with conviction,

as the dark winged angel tried to serve the humans,

with a permanent eviction.

Reviews

[LilyGrace]

Nice. The end has a great note of finality, both in style and meaning.
A good write
LGD

[Phibby Venable]

this is really a great poem of warning, all fine civilizations seem to destroy themselves
and start over, but this seems the complete end.
I like how it is written. It seems to have compassion woven all in with the action.
I love the frozen planet line. And a fine comment on the sun!!!
Really fine work!!