Missing....

Sadness, Loss, runaway

 

Mother’s tears,

father’s fears,

twice she ran away,

always talking,

so many angry words,

but there was nothing to say.

A Pick-up truck slowed

on the road,

just behind her.

It was after mid-night,

her options were thin,

his tone almost flippant,

as he demanded her to get in,

with a stare so ice cold,

the pick-up truck was hissing,

and she did as she was told,

now see her pictures everywhere..Missing...

Reviews

[~angelalala~]

this is a dark & interesting piece. it flows well. i really like the content of this one. i think you could even expand on it a little, to make it even more entertaining, give us a little more info about this girl, about her thoughts, her emotions, & maybe even the guy who kidnaps her. but overall, this is a unique piece, almost like a story, told in poetic form.