So I Guess It Seems

love

 

His clever touch

keeps me warm,

not as much

as his tender kiss,

his blowing wish,

his chiseled chest,

his muscled back,

his manly hold,

staves the cold,

his warm breath on my ear,

eliminates the fear,

and so I guess it seems,

he is the man of my dreams.

Reviews

[SIL_glasshalffull]

I appreciate the honesty within the writer's mind, you know? Seeming is very vague and mostly a question of our own minds, telling us that what seems, is most likely not what we want nor what it is and I think the poem dictates those actions. Yes, you describe well why he seems to be the man of your dreams, but is he?