The Pink Balloons

 

He snuck into the bathroom laughing. Inside he met wild balloons, and all of them were pink. Inside each balloon was a gift.

His penis trembled and brought him closer and the first balloon whispered into his mind and made him imagine dancing skeletons who were delighted to speak and be seen. Upon his dream he smiled and the balloon popped.

Others were waiting to be acknowledged.

He ran out and leaped into bed. His eyes were beaming and watery. His mouth felt like cotton and his stomach rumbled.

He turned over once settled and peered at the closed bathroom door with desire-ridden eyes and a swollen penis.

They were still waiting...

 

Reviews

[Pork Chopkins]

Intriguing. I like it. In particular, I'm fond of the line "His penis trembled and brought him closer and the first balloon whispered into his mind and made him imagine dancing skeletons who were delighted to speak and be seen.", very cryptic and descriptive.

[Loner]

Intriguing and weird. Makes me stare at the anima and blink.

[Oz in Exile]

More, please? I mean really, this is just a tease! Now suddenly I'm going to have eyes filled with desire and a penis swollen with...well, blood I suppose. Hmm, and if my eyes are blood-shot, I suppose it would give them something to have in common with my penis. Yes, commonality...there's the key. But no seriously...more??

[zig]

wow, i really liked this, strange and kind of "drug-like". great mood, i have no idea what its about, but i loved the mood. zig