The romantic's shadow

Pain of Unrequited love

I gazed once,
Then looked away.

Is she like me ?
A ghost who lost its way ?

Or just a mirage of ideals conjured by my eyes.

Reviews

[¿]

Too shocks at this short!
No matter how much gravity strech this towards ground this thought is taking high by lite weight...Great read☺

[Rye]

very well said and written, straight out to the point.

[R.E. Ray]

A bit of unrequited love and self-doubt pulling the heart back to protect the thin scars. Eloquent and simple with a lasting message. Nice piece!

[Ash]

Thanks man. . . :)