When Heart Cries.

When my heart cries out loudly,
When my blood flows tad fast,
When my chest fills up broadly,
I will confirm that she was the last.

When my eyes go blind in tears,
When my ears echo out your name,
When my brain surrenders for all fears,
I will realize that my love was lame.

When my hands go bloodless and cold,
When my legs stop supporting my weakness,
When my face gets loose and old,
I will remember the hatred i had to witness.

When my body will lie in a pool of blood,
When my heart would free my soul to the sky,
When my existence will be eaten by mud,
I will miss her but i cannot say why.

Reviews

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

I found this write very sincere. The repetition was truly effective. Life and the soul and will and sense, I felt it all here, well done!