For you,

Lying in Question

Share your precious Love with me

And I will never sleep

My sweet Soul mate, pleasing you,

Is all ill Ever do

Show me your rays of Imagination 

And ill claim my love for you through proclamation

Hanging on by the Sun's beam

Nothings too Hot for you and me

My Soul's dark corners inside

Your love captures my Demons and genocide

True love wanders helplessly through fields of harmony

Give me the word, ill capture it and have it to you by Morning

Drift away drift away

While I stare in fascination at your face

Id give my Soul to Demons as meat

For you, ill never sleep

Reviews

[Reeti]

It seems as though the speaker confesses that he/she is possessed by a demonic or uncontrolled rule of the mind. It is also as though the counterpart like Aphrodite has put a spell on him/her. Nonetheless, we can see how overwhelming and extensive love can be. At one point, physical appearance has entirely allured the speaker. The speaker is crazed enough to sacrifice for it by giving the soul to "Demons as meat". One can sense that this love is initially tantalizing and amorous with its end unknown. Yet, at the same time and at another point, it is spiritual- "True love wanders helplessly through fields of harmony..." nor "show me your rays of imagination" does not evince lustful feelings. Instead, that love will drive away "Demons and genocide". There are contradictory elicitations in the poem. However, of course, lustful feelings and spiritual love can exist at the same time. i have enjoyed reading this. Thank you.

[Matching Socks]

Wow, I can't imagine she'll say 'no'. :)
A lovely poem for someone special.

[KK]

Ana thank you

[Sophy Freebirds]

I love your dedication here. The vivid imagery you have painted carries me away... Nice piece of work. I think there is a typo" wonder- wander"..if you could give the apostrophe before will and would it would be more clear.. overall enchanting piece ;)

~Sophy

[KK]

Thank you. The first to ever catch any of my typos, lol congrats

[Sophy Freebirds]

Haha.. i am graced :p... was a pleasure buddy :)