My Undertaken Mistakes

...she just might forgive me...again

She's coming, she's coming and there's nothing I can do,

Not this time

Not after all iv done

Forgiveness will not be a matter in this subject,

She's coming

And she's coming for revenge

She's coming for blood, 

She's coming for me

Shhh...

Did you hear that,

The sound of all love being shackled

The sound of her grimly wheezing, 

If God almighty is real,

then this isnt a place for him

What have I done

I have nothing to show for my actions,

But everything to lose

I hear her

She's coming

...Hi

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

I don't know who that she is - an addiction or an ex but this was nice.. i could connect to it.. I liked the structure of the poem.. Basically we do some unforgivable mistakes because of whic we pay- that monent expertly captured.. with a nice flow..

~Sophy

[KK]

Thank you. Maybe ill tell you who she is some day

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ahhh sure :) de nada amigo