Fallen Vows

       

    

I don't want to break a promise

I don't want flowers to falter without them in your hands

I don't want to feel the seafoam on my feet without them touching yours first

I don't wanna be confined to watch you from afar

Let alone you, being my song unsung

For a little while-that seems forever

I vowed to the sounding waves

That I don't want years to come pass by without u

But I guess I already did. 

Astraea~

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Time runs by quickly and if you don’t catch the moment you’re looking for, then you’ve missed it. This is the kind of scene whereby one wants something so badly, but seems not to be able to grasp it in time….and that is the love for someone….a little too late….well done.
Best, B

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and strong words and thoughts shared dear Astraeaa.
"I don't want to break a promise
I don't want flowers to falter without them in your hands
I don't want to feel the seafoam on my feet without them touching yours first"
I loved the above lines. Promises made, promises broken. We will remember. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Astraeaa]

Thank you❤️

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear poet.

[Kim S.]

very heartfelt and emotional write, nicely expressed

[Astraeaa]

thank you!