Hummingbird

hummingbirds flock
feeding as rain recedes the sky
a buzzing rainbow

Reviews

[Frances O'Neill]

Nice thought! I have never seen a flock of hummingbirds, I mostly see them as solitary, hovering

birds.

[Stella]

A really nice haiku. Good words. Keep it up :)

[Rainbowco]

Lovely

[Tomás Ó C..]

Its a wonder how their tiny bodies mangae to flap so much, this little poem is a fitting tribute. You should add a picture of one of them to it.