Strawberry Spritzer

Sweet strawberry, tantalizing my tongue
Ripened to perfection
A juicy anodyne after a long day
With sugar and seltzer
It's a berry blast in my mouth
Excellente!
The redolent aroma invades
Mesmerized, I inhale
A pleasant delight
Retaliating on my tastebuds

© 2008 Celestine Astraea Firestorm

Author's Note

Placed 4th in the Happiness contest

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Jason Henry

this is lovely...but now i'm all hungry :( lol! thanks for sharing!

Posted 16 Years Ago

Blade & Blood (The ..

lol Great imagery. Assuming that this is an alcoholic drink, I couldn't relate to the piece, but you really made my taste buds tingle. This is excellent. :)

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on August 16, 2008
Last Updated on September 1, 2008

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Celestine Astraea Firestorm

Catania, Italy

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I'm a 23 year old Gemini Pagan Extrovert. Writing has been an addiction of mine since the ripe age of 13. It's a thirst that is never quenched. Your GoddessAug 20, 2008 - Sep 20, 2008This is a c.. more..