The Apprentice
A Book by Astra
A sixteen year old boy from our world discovers that he is actually a missing mage from another realm. He has to learn how to control the power raging in him before the man who stole his life ruins the rest of it.
© 2009 Astra
Author's Note
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Is the dialouge consistent? Where should there be more description? Should I introduce the main characters name earlier in the chapter? Any points that will help the book progress...its not finished yet, so bare with the mistakes :)
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Added on June 16, 2008
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AstraSt. Augustine, FL
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I have traveld to and lived in several different states on the East side of the Mississippi river. I have never been farther than St. Louis though I wish to one day get out west. I have spent 10 days .. more..
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