Eyes

Just going through rough patches.

Eyes

Teary eyes
Big world
What do you see?
Bickering
Angry words
Shouting at me.

Close my eyes
Hidden world
What do I see?
Peaceful dreams
Solitude
A world just for me.

Reviews

[CLR9]

Well, the good news is, it doesn't cost anything to post poems on the internet. The bad news is, this poem kinda sucks. It's cliche. Doesn't say anything new. A projection of antisocial negativity. Although it might be therapeutic to write this, people are wasting seconds of their life to read this.

I might as well start smoking if instead of reading work from this site.

The minutes taken off my life would be equal.

[Alessander]

Feels like a fight, or a struggle to see the world not through the pangs of pain but beats of hope

[inuSarah]

This makes me see the world we are living in versus the world we are dreaming to live! Great write!