Nerve

And AGAIN. I know. So sue me.

Clock ticks.
Foot taps.
Clock tocks.
Lady coughs.
Clock ticks.
Child falls.
Clock tocks.
Father moans.
Clock ticks.
Fly hums.
Clock tocks.
Sweat beads.
Clock ticks.
Mind cracks.
Clock tocks.
Thoughts snap.
Lungs scream.
Legs run.
I only wanted a Cola.

Reviews

[Vincent Asmodeus]

Actually, it reminds me of those guinness adverts... >.>

[magyk13]

kinda reminds me of Jim Morrison's poetry which happens to be some of my faves, liked it alot, keep up the good work and look forward to reading more of your creations.

[Eliza Valentine]

My head moves in time with the beat of this one... I know i'm weird :s