Invisible

Invisible

A Poem by Asiye

Her birth, disappointment.

Her crime, female.

Her mother, burden.

Her childhood, sheltered.

Her education, trivial.

Her worth, hymen.

Her marriage, obedience.

Her death, peace.

© 2014 Asiye


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There's nothing wrong with being a woman. It some cultures a female is a burden. Thanks for the review :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Oh wow, I have to say that the world is unfair to woman. Most of the family, all around the world, might hate you because you are a girl. A lot of families do, what's wrong with begin a woman? Anyway, nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Asiye
Asiye

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Just a female who is venturing into the world of writing. I'm experimenting with words, trying to get my thoughts out there. I don't expect anything out of this, just trying to get out of my comfort z.. more..

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