Horizontal Rain

It burst upon me

Horizontal rain
Cleanse the earth
Find fissures
Once thought sealed
Stand still traffic
Open pores
Enliven
Imagine

Reviews

[Cherrie]

That pallet cleansing shower that renews

[AllenS]

Cherrie, somehow I missed your comment. Please forgive.
Walking across the darkened parking lot last evening, I felt the sting of icy rain piercing the comfort of my fatigued forarm. Noticed the difference from the rain I wrote about.

[Cherrie]

That is so true and you cannot escape from that nasty weather. Well unless you move. :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I find a horizontal rain the hardest and coldest to walk against. Great lines here, Allen. A "must read again" for later!

Did you know there's a word for those who love the rain? Its called "pluviophile".

[AllenS]

Great word! Thanks for the read.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Love the vitality of this image and poem. Also love rain when it comes like this.. lovely language, flow, cadence.. Last word, like the sun, bursts forth after the cleansing rain..great write!

[AllenS]

Thanks, Annette. I liked the though of horizontal rain. When it actually burt upon me, I was frighteded

[Coyote Poetry]

Rain. A blessing and a curse. Mainly a blessing. Nice use of words made the reader think. Thank you Allen for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[AllenS]

Thanks John. I somehow overlooked this comment and poem. Please forgive. There was a time I was not writing and I thought I caught up but not completely. I value your comments.

[Coyote Poetry]

No problem and you are welcome Allen.