Forever Touching

Forever Touching

A Poem by Asilem
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a poem

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Winter is ice

Spring and autumn are water

And summer is air

 

Hatred is hard

Friendship and happiness are soft

And love is melting

 

Enemies are far away

Friends and family are close

And lovers are forever touching

© 2012 Asilem


Author's Note

Asilem
I wrote this in Pre-Algebra in seventh grade... I find that i write the best things in math... Haven't the foggiest idea why.

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I hate poems, but I'll admit I like this one xD I don't have the faintest idea what it means, but it is pretty awesome xD
Those who are more right brained find it easier to write creatively and enjoy it, math is a purely left brained thing... that probably makes no sense to you, but there you go for a reason xD

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asilem

11 Years Ago

oh, i completely understand it. I've had someone tell me that before. Thank you! :)
Ella

11 Years Ago

xD Oh awkie... And welcome :D
Asilem

11 Years Ago

:D



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I love your metaphors, they're simply stated but full of imagination :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asilem

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

No problem :)
I hate poems, but I'll admit I like this one xD I don't have the faintest idea what it means, but it is pretty awesome xD
Those who are more right brained find it easier to write creatively and enjoy it, math is a purely left brained thing... that probably makes no sense to you, but there you go for a reason xD

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asilem

11 Years Ago

oh, i completely understand it. I've had someone tell me that before. Thank you! :)
Ella

11 Years Ago

xD Oh awkie... And welcome :D
Asilem

11 Years Ago

:D

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Added on December 28, 2012
Last Updated on December 28, 2012
Tags: forever touching, love, romance, friends

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Asilem
Asilem

Washinton DC, DC



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