Vanity

Vanity

A Story by Asian Kid.
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When 17 year old Vanity arrive's in town. She start's getting stalk by a boy at school but 1 hour later. Strange thing's are happing to her but unit she find's out she turn into a vampire.

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Mom 
I don't wanna leave
Vanity i'm sorry. Your just gonna stay with your dad for a month
You know how far he live's. He live's Seattle in a small little town called Spring creek 
Well Vanity your gonna stay with him and there's nothing else that's gonna change my mind
Mom this is unfair 
Hurry your gonna miss the flight
I wish whisper Vanity
What did you say dear
Oh Nothing
5 hour's later
Vanity Over here
Yeah, yeah i'm coming
I miss you so much your grown up so fast
Yeah I didn't see you since i was 5
Wow i almost forgot it's like i seen you yesterday
Oh
Where here
Wow the house change it used to be white now it's blue
Yeah i wanted to change it up
Do you still remember where's your room I fix it up for you
Cool thank's dad
Vanity can you come to the store with me
Okay while going to the store a guy was staring at her
Wait dad this isn't a store 
Yup i'm buying you a car what kind of car do you want
Well i wanted a scion xb ever since it came out
Okay we get that for you
Well tomorrow you start school so wanna go buy some stuff like clothes and school thing's
Well i already got some clothes and some school supplies 
Okay let's go home than
While going home again a guy was staring at her again
Dad who's that guy 
Oh he's new in town again
Oh okay
Well you should be heading to bed it's 10 o'clock you don't wanna be late for school tomorrow
Yeah while going home Vanity heard weird noises
Good night dad 
Good night Vanity
Wake up said dad
Oh sorry dad i forgot 
Wow my car came in 
Nope i pick it up this ain't California any more 
Yeah sorry i'm not getting used to this place yet
Well you have to 
Bye dad see you later
Bye Bud
While going to school a guy was staring at her again 
Well this is it East Manchester High School
Well hello 
Hi
I'm Janice 
I'm Vanity
Nice Name 
Thank's it was my great grandma's name 
Well what classes do you have 
Math/Math, English/English S.s/Science
No way! i have the same period's as you
Cool at least i know someone 
Don't worry 
Oh my gosh
What
That guy
Who? 
That guy him
Oh him
Yeah him what's his name
His name is Ashes Weird yeah
Yeah it is 
Good morning class this is our new student name Vanity
Sorry Vanity we have no other partner's except
Ashes 
Okay that's fine with me
Hello I'm Ashes but you can call me Ash 
Hi I'm Vanity 
I seen you around like yesterday 
Oh really i just met you
But ii.. Never mind let's get to work
Okay 
40 minutes later. The bell rang
So how's your lab partner 
Weird and kinda cute 
Everyone think's that you won't get a chance with him believe it a lot of girl's asked him out and he said no i tried
I wasn't planning too
Sure
Wanna go lunch
Okay
Who are they 
That's the Von Carpal  
Ashes- The cute one 
Lullaby- The weird one 
Quentin- The shy one
Jinx- The b***h or some people say the devil
But watch out for her 
Let me say hi 
No don't go there Vanity !
Hi
What do you want said Jinx 
I guess this was a bad choice 
See this is why we don't have friend's thank's Jinx 
your not welcome Quentin
Wait.. Hi i'm Lullaby 
Hi i'm Quentin
Hello i'm Jinx 
Hi i'm Ash but you already know me 
Well nice meeting you again 
Hi I'm Vanity
Well nice meeting you guy's 
Wait Vanity i'm having a party tonight wanna come 
Sure thank's Lullaby can i invite my friend 
Sure well see you tonight
Janice wanna come 
Where ? 
To Lullaby party tonight
Sure 
What time should i pick you up
6 o'clock 
Well okay
Time for the next period 
1 hour later. It's after school
Well okay meet my friend's 
This is Angelica 
Blaine
John 
And me Janice 
Hi 
Hi i'm Vanity
Cool name and nice ride
Thank's i just got it yesterday 
Is it your first day of school  
Yeah it's been a daft 
Oh really 
Oh hi Mr. Holbrook
Sorry it's my first day it's kinda hard
It's okay well i got to go 
Bye Mr. Holbrook
Goodbye kid's
Oh my gosh that was creepy
Tell me about it. It's like he's a vampire 
Well see you guy's later gotta go
Yeah see you tonight 
Okay 
Wait what's happening tonight
Oh Lullaby Von Carpal invited us to her party
Oh wow didn't you here about them 
No why 
People say there vampire's 
Oh that's stupid 
So if i were you i wouldn't go 
Sorry Vanity i'm not going
Janice but i don't wanna be alone 
Okay fine i come if anything happen's i'm going home 
Yeah okay
I meet you at school there house is kinda close to school 
Okay
Later that night
Hi Janice 
Hey 
Wait i'm kinda scared 
Don't be scared 
Aren't you 
No 
Why 
Because didn't you hear what Angelica them said about The Von Carpal
Yeah but it's gotta be fake there's no such thing as vampire's 
Did you know they all have weird names 
Yeah 
Can we just go 
Yeah sorry i'm not that scared anymore
That's good
Where here
Oh my gosh there house is so big 
Wow there's a lot of people here 
Hey i see angelica them
Angelica
Blaine 
John 
You guy's said you ain't Gonna come
Sorry we just wanted to see if you guy's show up 
Are you sure. Okay, Okay they invited us well we couldn't lie to them and reject them 
Since where here let's party 
You guy's can i'm gonna look for Ash
Who's Ash ?
Ash is Ashes he told me to call him Ash 
Oh I think he like's you 
No he does not we just me 
Sure thing 
Well i'm just gonna talk to him i see you later 
Okay have fun 
Bye
Vanity couldn't find Ashes unit she went in is room
Hi 
Oh my gosh you scared me how come your not partying like the other's 
I hate loud noise 
Yeah me to sometimes
This give's us time to talk
Yeah it does
Well are you lying about never mind
Tell me 
Okay it's like saw you around at the store
On the road just tell me i won't get mad 
Yes you did see me around i saw you at the store 
and on the road because i see you in my mind 
What do you mean 
I like you Vanity 
How can you like me when we just met in class 
Kiss me Vanity 
No 
Ashes came closer to Vanity face and closer. They started kissing 
And started to take off there clothes 
Stop i have to go i'm sorry
Wait
What
I love you
I like you 
While that kiss Vanity was feeling werid she just wanted something to drink.
Than she wanted blood and that's all 
She look at her skin it was pale and her skin was cold
and she found out she was a vampire.

© 2010 Asian Kid.


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It sounds a bit like twilight.
But other then that , great for a first story (:

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My first story

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Added on May 18, 2010
Last Updated on May 31, 2010
Tags: Horror, Romance

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Asian Kid.

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