This Feeling

You know that new fresh feeling?
The one where a relationship is just beginning
When all your insides feel like butterflies
Flying around in the daylight

That curiosity feeling being with each other
Trying to figure out one another
As the days, months, or years go on
You either stay or move on

Now I'm scared to loose you
Contemplating on what to choose
Nothing is forever
But i want you more then ever

But ill never say it!
Ill never cave in
Those three words
Are nothing but a curse

Thinking of a future
A one with me and you
Are you even worth it?
Are you really different?

This love takes time
But every second your on my mind
So do me a favor please
Just stay or leave

Author's Note

My first one.I want to improve on my poetry skills so honest review please. I can handle it :)

Reviews

[lovergirl]

nothing to dislike , i truly LOVE it , Damn girl you killed it for real ;) good job it's an A+
and about those emotions you expressed you really know how to show your heart out , i can't stop smiling from the 1st sentence till the last one that's how much i liked this poem , it's almost similar to my life story so i honestly related big time to it so thanks for sharing and letting us read it and enjoy it :)

[Gaiamethod]

OK. I'm not brilliant at recognizing good or nor so good poetry in terms of technical ability as all poetry comes from the soul I think, but I do love the way you describe emotions really clearly. There is no mistaking the fear and the hope in the poem. As a writer you are 'open' and readable and that, for me, is really important. Your poems feel congruent and from the heart rather than from the mind, where it is obvious, to me, that is has not been experienced. You do 'experience' and that comes across really well.
I have read a few of your poems and they all feel 'real' and I really like that.
Keep going!!!

[Violet Ray]

Thank you so much.

[A Scribbler Named Bek]

This is really good :) I think it describes what relationships are really like. Not that I'd...you know...know. Anyways, nice job! Only thing I'd suggest is to change the 'your' in the last stanza to 'you're' because I'm about to start banging my head on a wall. DARN TYPOS!!!!

[Violet Ray]

i apologize but im glad you enjoyed it thank you.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Rhythmic and satisfying cadence. Message is clear, Anyone who has hopes of love can relate.
Check spelling.
Fine work!

[Alex Boyd]

Beautiful I can relate to this poem and that's where the beauty of writing is. Having people relate or enlighten your readers and I was enlighten....