In Sun's Light

In sun's light, Above our mountains A set of eyes glide A soul in the skies wistfully, it tries to witness the world in a different way than I With a careful scan, it sees A shimmer of color On the rocks, and cradling the trees Auras of sound A song of life resonating Undeterred by the breeze.

Reviews

[Creepy Swine Guy]

This reads like a very evocative version of a bird's eye view. I found it to be most enjoyable

[Jeannear]

very well written poem :)

[Austin Greenius]

This is now one of my favorite poems.

[sansame]

Thanks :$ hehe

[Wuji]

I really enjoyed reading this, I imagined myself witness to all the beauty of nature.

[sansame]

Thank you! :)

[Sami Khalil]

Above our mountains
A set of eyes glides ( glide)
A soul in the skies
wistfully, it tries to witness the world
in a different way than I

A splendid read and write...:)...............................

[sansame]

Oh I completely missed that! Thank you very much! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome ....:).........................

[Coll Silvermoon]

Short but powerful. Imagery was everywhere. I love it!

[sansame]

Thank you!

[Neon]

Yeah! Sounds great!
I love reading short poems much. Here in the write, I've founded how you starred at the beauty of life and transformed the feelings of yours into the words ... from the depth of your kind soft red beat heart beating heart. I love the ending ... how to started the write with some soft smooth flow with the words n how to ended the write with the same smoothness ...is great ...that's what touched my heart!

As you mentioned, your new to the site but I think, your old and your damn good at writing. Writing's seemed in your pulses!
Keep writing and making your pulses warm so that you could write and write more and more making the space into the hearts!

[sansame]

Thank you very much!

[Neon]

My pleasure, pretty :)

And As I always say, i'd love saying again that keep smiling n laughing making the world pure and peaceful living with all of your sweetness that's much sweeter then a sugar.

Keep flying as same as an angel over the sky spreading your scent everywhere making every heart beat fast living! :)