thinking of you

when you have someone on your mind

I think of many things through the day

like how bright the sun is

or how sweetly the birds sing

how the wind feels blowing through my hair

an then I think of how I wish you were near

all the beautiful little things that make my day

are so much better when your next to me

the way you hold my hand

the way you smile when our eyes meet

a simple touch ever so gentle

or even a pinch cute and playful

a bubble of laughter rises from inside

every time your humor arrives

all these little things make one big day complete

there’s so much more I could say

but I'd be rambling most of the day

so I will keep this short and sweet

and look forward until the next time we meet

know this through and through

I am thinking of you

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

"I'm Thinking Of You" .. very poetically romantic title it is that's generously pen'd up across romania words, which further soothing hearts.
Nice shot. Loved the realism of your heart that speaks openly & makes world more beautiful looking with love. Love's what one needs to be lived with peace, but hardly the ones appreciate what they've got in their hands, you seem to be quite bewitched with love - the love that you've in you with faith and "satisfaction" of everything. Every line you seemed to be bled in is very deep and prolifically written across magnified words. Enjoyed reading it. Great job!

[Ashly Christen]

bewitched with love...ahh...yes...indeed that a great way to put it. sounds like a movie title :)read morebewitched with love...ahh...yes...indeed that a great way to put it. sounds like a movie title :)
perhaps my next inspiration
thank you again

[Ashly Christen]

bewitched with love must be why I like your writing so much!

[Dr. Wood ?]

very sweet and even innocent......true love

[Silhouette]

This is very romantic, sweeet, and a little sad. I really enjoyed reading this, great job =)

[Ashly Christen]

thank you so much for reading :D

[Silhouette]

Anytime =)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"when your next to me" spelling here..."you're" for correction. I loved this write, it was sweet and sentimental and beautiful like you my friend. Also...see if you can't enlarge those last two lines to equal the rest of the piece. After all...they were the icing on the cake. (smile) I give this a whopping 100%

[Ashly Christen]

fab when i finish a novel i should send it to you for review lol thank you so very much, i always value your opinion xo!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh the power of love is limitless... such a sweet and romantic poem.

[Ashly Christen]

thankya cowboy :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice dedication

[quinfinn]

all the simple things in life, all the tiny pleasures, feel so much larger and more important, more resonant, more flavorful when the one you love is there to share them with you. how masterfully and in such harmonious thought do you share that with us here. beautiful write.

[Ashly Christen]

and such a beautiful review thank u quin

[quinfinn]

welcome, poet!

[Ashly Christen]

:) xo

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i could do the same ramble being in a long distance relationship and feeling exactly like this...

it is a good feeling to love this much and miss this much...but it also can hurt and be frustating too...

i couldn't have expressed it better...

nice write.

[Ashly Christen]

thank you very much jacob your always very encouraging
:D