thinking of you

when you have someone on your mind

I think of many things through the day

like how bright the sun is

or how sweetly the birds sing

how the wind feels blowing through my hair

an then I think of how I wish you were near

all the beautiful little things that make my day

are so much better when your next to me

the way you hold my hand

the way you smile when our eyes meet

a simple touch ever so gentle

or even a pinch cute and playful

a bubble of laughter rises from inside

every time your humor arrives

all these little things make one big day complete

there’s so much more I could say

but I'd be rambling most of the day

so I will keep this short and sweet

and look forward until the next time we meet

know this through and through

I am thinking of you

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

"I'm Thinking Of You" .. very poetically romantic title it is that's generously pen'd up across romania words, which further soothing hearts.
Nice shot. Loved the realism of your heart that speaks openly & makes world more beautiful looking with love. Love's what one needs to be lived with peace, but hardly the ones appreciate what they've got in their hands, you seem to be quite bewitched with love - the love that you've in you with faith and "satisfaction" of everything. Every line you seemed to be bled in is very deep and prolifically written across magnified words. Enjoyed reading it. Great job!

[Ashly Christen]

bewitched with love...ahh...yes...indeed that a great way to put it. sounds like a movie title :)read morebewitched with love...ahh...yes...indeed that a great way to put it. sounds like a movie title :)
perhaps my next inspiration
thank you again

[Ashly Christen]

bewitched with love must be why I like your writing so much!

[Renée]

Very Sweetly Done

[Seanh12]

Wow this is amazing I love it, well done. Thank you very much for sending it to me. The picture you have used is really really good and i love it. Have you drawn it yourself?

[Ashly Christen]

thank you, no i did not i got it off of deviantart.com i love that site! thank u again for a great review

[Seanh12]

It's ok no problem was great I loved it will read it again soon. It's a great picture. X

[Mary Christabel George]

I am seeing....... Love is in the air.....:)

[sithlordjp]

A very touching, honest piece. I felt the emotions in each word. "all these little things make one big day complete" Indeed... Well done!

[Ashly Christen]

thank you

[MAC]

what a wonderfully sincere write Ashly ~sigh~ filled with love and sadness.

[Ashly Christen]

thank u my dear mark

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A lovely flowing piece full of love of a gentle and intention.

[Ashly Christen]

thank you :D

[Ohhhwillow]

The most we love the more well feel - both good and bad. Keep your chin up though, I guarantee the time will go faster between being together if you prove to yourself you can be happy whilst apart. Very gently written :)

[kublakhan27]

This is a poem that wraps its arms around you, and every line is like a peck on the cheek...nicely done :)

[BL]

Love doesn't seem to take into account the geography of the world, if two people are together in love, then they are as far as its concerned they are together, highlighting the fact it's the reason for us being here and other things like work, commitments and are current situation should be secondary.

[Tai Ryens]

I could never have expressed it any better. Well done.