thinking of you

when you have someone on your mind

I think of many things through the day

like how bright the sun is

or how sweetly the birds sing

how the wind feels blowing through my hair

an then I think of how I wish you were near

all the beautiful little things that make my day

are so much better when your next to me

the way you hold my hand

the way you smile when our eyes meet

a simple touch ever so gentle

or even a pinch cute and playful

a bubble of laughter rises from inside

every time your humor arrives

all these little things make one big day complete

there’s so much more I could say

but I'd be rambling most of the day

so I will keep this short and sweet

and look forward until the next time we meet

know this through and through

I am thinking of you

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

"I'm Thinking Of You" .. very poetically romantic title it is that's generously pen'd up across romania words, which further soothing hearts.
Nice shot. Loved the realism of your heart that speaks openly & makes world more beautiful looking with love. Love's what one needs to be lived with peace, but hardly the ones appreciate what they've got in their hands, you seem to be quite bewitched with love - the love that you've in you with faith and "satisfaction" of everything. Every line you seemed to be bled in is very deep and prolifically written across magnified words. Enjoyed reading it. Great job!

[Ashly Christen]

bewitched with love...ahh...yes...indeed that a great way to put it. sounds like a movie title :)read morebewitched with love...ahh...yes...indeed that a great way to put it. sounds like a movie title :)
perhaps my next inspiration
thank you again

[Ashly Christen]

bewitched with love must be why I like your writing so much!

[Memnoch]

picture perfect poem! I could feel the playful text dance in my mind
and the longing to see this person again. And by the way the pic was perfect for this
poem.

Loved it
Kelley Frost

[Barry S. Maltese]

Even your poem about missing someone remains light hearted. I always liked your style. Never stop looking through your heart, for it will forever nurture your soul, and those who partake of your words.

[Jordan Smith]

I really enjoyed this one alot. As someone who writes Romance poems and is working on my first romance book, I really am glad that I can enjoy reading someone else's perspective on romance. Great job with this one Ashly :)

[Ashly Christen]

thank you very much!

[Jordan Smith]

Your Absolutely Welcome Ashly :)

[KeeD]

this was so innocent and from the heart.. just the sweetest poem ever :) good job

[Ashly Christen]

thank you very much keegan :)

[Everett DeValle]

Lovely poem. It's like a private love letter. :)

~Ev

[Ashly Christen]

thank you
it kinda was ;)

[Everett DeValle]

You're welcome, Ashley. :)

[Lily Mae]

So lovely and full of love in such a romantic form.. Very beautiful..xo

[Ashly Christen]

thank you very much sorry for the delayed reply

[Reeti]

I must also oint out that the painting is SUPERB! =)

[Reeti]

You have furnished the poem with simple, yet, invaluable words. The rhyming effect creates a symphony sweet and supple. I feel the same way with my beloved. My days are incomplete without his presence or his voice. I can really resonate to this poem. Its ending is the part to cherish most.

[Ashly Christen]

thank you very much for the wonderfuly review reeti
:) so glad u enjoyed it

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful. All the way to the end. ;) Lovely piece. ^_^

[Ashly Christen]

many thank yous