Distance

Long distance relationships: the pain yet the happiness all in one.

What’s wrong with me?

What’s going on?

I don’t understand. 

Always. 

Always I need you. 

To hear your voice. 

To see your face. 

To be wrapped in your arms. 

But what’s wrong with me?

What’s going on. 

I can’t comprehend. 

You love me. 

I love you. 

So why aren’t we together. 

I’m here. 

You are there. 

The days until I see you again;

Counting down... 

So slowly. 

The pain increasing. 

I need you now. 

I need your warm embrace. 

I know I won’t lose you. 

But distance, 

Distance can kill a person. 

Can it kill me?

No. 

I’m strong. 

Will I cry anyway?

Until the day you are home with me.

Until the day I wake up to your face. 

Until the day... 

We are together, again. 

Reviews

[angHELL]

I'm feeling exactly the same.

[Lily]

SO GOOD!

[Seerose]

I know these feelings you have described. And you've managed it very well.

[Vanna Renee]

I like this...
With every line... I feel a soft patter
But... I want a big BANG, a big punch in the heart, and I KNOW you can give it to me (:
You have before,
So do it again!
It was nice and I felt the intensity but give it to us harder (:
Can't wait to read your next

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true emotion. When distance separate two people in love. The pain can be very strong and painful. I like the flow and the emotion of this poem. Very good description in the poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote