LOSING MY MIND

 

 

   It's been 5 month since we last talked

 

   going insane

 

   don't even know what to say to you

 

    i'am so losed can't find my way out of this hazes

 

    

  Everyday i circle around your name

 

  losing my mind, thought maybe we were done

 

  but i guess not

 

  everywhere i go i look for you

 

  but i know you are no where not even close

 

 

   like a bottle im about to explode

 

   because  here we go

 

   stir crazy i'm about to go

 

   what makes me wanting to come back to you?

  

 

Reviews

[B-poet]

Absence makes the heart grow fonder in this case. I love how you've shed light on the inner emotional struggle that takes place when losing a significant other. Great work. :)

[Jvl narasimharao]

A wonderful poem.A great longing for whom we love

[Skye]

Holding on to something familar, and longing to have it back. wonderfully penned.

[asdarkeyesclose]

'like a bottle im about to explode
because here we go'


sometimes there is no letting go. fabulous.