only time will tell

 

 Miles behind her

 lost with time

pale hand reaches for the next tree

blends in with the white of snow

flakes fall around

touches hair of black

through sad green eye

she looks far and wide

 

 miles around nothing

insight

smell of cold freezes her lips

where she goes

only she knows

she looking for someone unknown

name is just a whisper on her lips

she cannot hear.

she looks for this unknown

she feels its her destiny

ever nerve ending comes alive

 

Will she find what she looking for

will she freeze in time like a statue?

only time will tell

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts and I like the description and possibilities in the poem.
"she looks for this unknown
she feels its her destiny "
A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

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Good job :)

[Corset]

very intriguing! This is how I feel sometimes, lol, very nice. :)

[afra]

good job ...keep it up

[Marissa]

very nice it's descriptive and shows meaning

[darkness*star1985]

thank you

[Marissa]

your welcome