The repeat of one single night

 Sit and wonder

how this is going to be

lights go out

the storm comes

 sit and wait

for what im not sure

 

go ahead and smoke your cigerettes

pick up and sip on your bottle of wine

seem like you in effected by storm

brewing out your window.

it grows cold and i shiver

the flash of lightening tells me

where you stand.

 

like a shadow on my wall

i can smell the smoke

tasted the wine

i know your close by

i wont be afraid

and i wont hide

because im frozen

in this endless time.

 

another days ago by

but my day repeats

sit and wonder

how this is going to be

light go out

the storm comes

sit and wait

for now i know what is to come.

Reviews

[sushi]

Sadness; but still beautiful....

[Althelia Marie Caine]

Very Nice my friend

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Like the storm, we wait for the moment. Just like the lightening we know thunder will come. The waiting for more. Great poem

[Ravyne Hawke]

Wonderful dark poem that has great flow and balance to it. Fave lines:

"and I won't hide
because im frozen
in this endless time."

Excellent! Definitely a favorite.

[FJ Davis]

Sadness; resignation at being trapped in an emotional time-loop.
Genuine emotion.
Impactful poem, d.