Take me for who i am

Take me for who I am
and be done with it
like a flower just in late bloom
have my days, have my times

staring at these blank pages
words slip in and out of my mind
words that twist me up in the Sunday
sunlight, so take me for who I am

no attention in being perfect
i won't match and i fall flat.
i don't make sense, and i say
um to much. Take me for who I am

Take me for who I am,
no less, so be done with it
and move on. take me for who I am
like a flower in a different shape then all the rest

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

wonderful poem of uniqueness!

[Ashley]

this was a wonderful poem full of emotion. excellent.

[Althelia Marie Caine]

I can really relate to this. Good write

[FJ Davis]

Up-front and well-stated. Repetition of the line, "Take me for who I am" is a nice touch; seeming to be somewhere between a plea and insistence.
Good, from-the-heart work, d.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Good poem, we are who we are and that makes us unique.