in the dark two

Redo from what i once had, i made this poem in 2007

 

 In the dark

i scream to be free

everything inside me is dying

 

I'm losing myself,

growing weark by the mintue

as my heart starts to fall apart

i can't cry

my tears turn into dusk

 

I'm losing the battle

the war is almost over

and i'm falling faster

 

I don't think i can

wait until tomorrow

i am losing ground

i close my eyes

and hope to wake

 

i want to be free

i can't hold on

how much will my heart take

 

 

 

Reviews

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

i started to cry because i have felt this feeling more then once but this was great and was written perfectly

[darkness*star1985]

after reading about the poems you can't bare to read or place on this site, i remember i had this one and another one that might make you realize that you are not alone. thank you.

[♥ Lexii Boo ♥]

no problem