tear me down

Back against the wall.

time is ticking down.

hate in my eyes. 

You broke what was inside, 

now i have everything to hide.

walls are you going up. 

so high.

You think your winning, 

everytime you tear me down.

you don't have a clue, 

what is hidding in the depths.  

In the shadows i will move. 

          

I will break free from this cage.

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

A very visceral and emotive piece of poetry. I'm one to believe that that old adage about as writers we must write what we know best. For quite a few artists it is pain and suffering. If you can make even just one person feel or relate to the work you have created then it is of substantial value. There have been times in my past I felt exactly the way these words have expressed. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.