Will i

 

            Strong loving arms to hold me, though the night.
          
            Gentle hands to promise protection, and safety.

             Sweat lips to kiss my forehead and tell me it be alright

            Easy enjoyable talks, laughter, watching the world pass us by
              
               

               These are the things i dream about.



          Fights, screams, cries,

             My flaws, my mistakes,
 
                  can't stop and think before i reacted.

                  never knowing when the end is near..

                       push and pull, down and up..

                         lost, broken, and hurt.

                 These are my reality..

          
         
                              Will i stand or will i fight?
                
                                will i bent or will i fall?
 
                                will i win or will i lose?
 
                               Unending battles, unending questions,

  Will i break or will i walk?

                                     Only time will tell

Reviews

[Leona Cieri]

Oh, I really like this poem! >w<
That last line? One of my favorite phrases and it fits perfectly with this poem!
A few spelling and grammatical errors, but they're hidden by the whole idea and flow of the poem; I enjoyed reading this a lot ^^
The whole reality versus fantasy (or dreams) is very appealing as I'm sure many of us can relate to that. The "Will I" questions really adds to the piece as sometimes repetition works, while sometimes it hurts.
Very nice poem; loved how it went somewhere with the concept~ Great job!