Night

Put me down, knock me out.
 Shut me up, lock me down.

Rather take a beating, then your Cold silent.
3am and I'm wake awake.. with those dark thoughts.
 How wonderful the thought of slide a blade again.

 But I promise to give that up. Promise I try to keep.
 Will I ever change.. always my fault.
 So much riding on my shoulders..
Will I ever get out of my dark ways. And find the light?

 Night skies take my heart, Cool night air clean my soul, Night owl spread your wings fly me far, Night moon shine the way, I am a child of the night, longing to disappear in the deep shadows of the night..

 out of the light.... into the night.

Reviews

[Krista]

I'm going to be compleltey honest which is rare for me. I can relate to every word of this poem. So powerful and true for many probably

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

I really like this piece. I completely connect with the line about the blade. Takes me back to a time where I wasn't my best.

I fully enjoyed this. I love the whole night time setting.
There were a few grammatical errors, but nothing too big.

Great Job overall!