no reason to fight.

Hey there, if i can only get a moment of your time,
I make this short.


I am done, we have lost.
White flag i rise.
It hurts to much, to be sitting here waiting
and praying to the gods.

I know my mistakes, i know you can't turn back
I don't blame you for wanting too.

But it doesn't stop the hurt, the tears, if i can just
forget your name, but its in my mind everyday.

I guess our times as slipped away, i never forget.
I set and wonder how to move on, so easy like you have done.

I know I have left and came running back.
I never understood why, maybe i wasn't ready.
For a love so pure, that it took me by surprise.

I just wanted you to know, that i given up
your the last love i truly will love.
The others can't compare.

I'll miss you for until the end of time
my love, I just found out that time
isn't on myself, i just have months
but i carry you with me were every i go.

i have no reason to fight.

Reviews

[Althelia Marie Caine]

I sense your pain, and the intense depth of emotion in this. My chest tightened while reading this because I relate completely. The pain you must have been in, or are in is surely unbearable.
I love the style you used to this one. It somehow fits with the way you wrote it.

[Shay]

so much raw and strong emotions... i really like it good write

[Maria]

so much feeling and emotion portrayed in the one poem, i like how it flows nicely, some grammar errors, but overall great write :)

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

very nice, some grammatical errors are there, but the theme is nice and message is received :) beautiful piece

[Mockingbird]

despair and depressing. great job.

[B-poet]

Losing the love of your life can be a life-altering experience. If you were the cause for the separation that's when it truly hurts the most. A well written adaptation of what goes on internally when it happens. Great job. :)

[Jack...]

Sounds to me like you have many reason's to fight. Why let the love of your life(?) get away.

Very sad to the heart but I still see a glimmer of hope.

[Captain]

The message is a sad but beautiful one. You need to work a little bit on your grammar, which I could gladly help you with if you'd like, but the otherwise language that you use is both simple yet elegant. Overall, I really like this.

[Chaos_Collector]

There comes a time for some where we find a person that we love so much, then lose them and don't see the point in loving anyone else, because we think it'll never compare. Someday though, you'll find that someone who's worth loving and giving your all to. Interesting write by the way