the moment i will savor.

the moment i will savor.

A Poem by darkness*star1985
"

This is the dream i had last night, well it went in deeper but that is for myself to hold on too lol.

"
Touching you again
Feeling you close by

we walked and talked for hours
you smile at me, and off to find a room

I savored all that i could touch,
my fingers clawed down your skin

It was like we never skip a beat
You hold me you love me

that you never will let me go
Kisses that were so sweet

lying next to you
my heart skip a beat

Happiness filled from my toes to my nose
life couldn't get any better

Then the buzzer went off
and i woke up

"damn it was just a dream"

Now when will i see you again.


© 2012 darkness*star1985


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This is real poetry and very nice dreams.
"I savored all that i could touch,
my fingers clawed down your skin"
Sometime sweet dreams feel like real life. Sad when we must awake. I like the dream and the outstanding poetry.
Coyote


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I've had similar dreams. Just when it's getting good the morning intrudes. Sometimes not even the morning but the middle of the night. If only just a while longer. Good poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is real poetry and very nice dreams.
"I savored all that i could touch,
my fingers clawed down your skin"
Sometime sweet dreams feel like real life. Sad when we must awake. I like the dream and the outstanding poetry.
Coyote


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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