come back love

I am sorry
I should have called you

Now I have
So come back to me

Once last time
will be the final

Remember all the things we had
remember you wanted to marry me

My heart is screaming, reaching for you
can your feel it?

Came back to me
we can run,
run away from here

I need you, i know you need me
NO one gets us they way we do

You can sit there and pretend
that you are not affected by this

You can be as strong and try
but i see right though what you hide

we have the history,
So that's go, lets run.

be back into my arms
where you belong

I belong with you
I want to be bound to you for all times

So i bow down
Take my hand

come back to me
to us, my heart calls to yours

Can you feel me?
you can't escape us
Our hearts beat as one

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to beg for forgiveness and to find the place you were once were. I like the desire of hope in the poem. Some walls are hard to break down. If we are lucky and get a second change. Best be thankful and good. I did like the strong ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Maria]

i like how short the lines and stanzas are, it creates more emphasis, and a detached kind of tone, it works well!

[Shay]

the words in the poem are strong and the emotion speaks through, i love it

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

Been there and burned the book.. Things I wish I would never have said. I don't know why this affected me as it did...perhaps explains my way of once gone, never once looking back. There is something in me which will not allow it. This piece speaks to that desire to return. For reclaimation. I don't know if I believe it is possible - but that is my interpret, and it is nice to know not all are as cynical as I. I hear the depth of feeling in this... yearning without much hope. This writing is very strong and infused with emotion. That is clear. And technically, very well done. Thank you!

[Annabelle Lee]

ahh... full of emotion.. very relatabe. good job

[B-poet]

Does absence make the heart grow founder? In this case it truly does. How can you deny what you once had. As long as it was special why give it a second chance. Nice work. :)

[Amanda]

I like it, it kind of reminds me of the Bill/Sookie relationship. I mean, she and he were going to get married and then they just threw it out the window. I wish they would just get back together. Great poem, it really makes you think!

[afra]

Awww good job