Flame take my hand

Flame of night burn this place down

set this place into a blaze.

Nothing is to be saved

Ash to ash

Dust to dust.

Take my hand

Break my bones
 
Take the nothing i hold

Flames high burning, hot

Take my pain, burn it to the ground

I will rise to high ground being born new

Made out of steal, Nothing can destroy
 
touch my heart in you will burn alive.

come even close

Shield will explode, blowing you away.


Flame take my hand

On your mark, Get set, Go!!!

Reviews

[Shay]

i love the emotion resonating in each line. it builds and builds as your lines progress and the poem continues. this is a very well done and interesting piece. I really enjoyed it, thank you for sharing :)

[ewest1220]

Very well done, I loved the last two lines! Keep it up!

[Skye]

A little shiver passed through me as I read it. Amazing.

[afra]

Wow another dark poem......good job once again

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the flow of thoughts in the poem.
"Ash to ash
Dust to dust.
Take my hand
Break my bones"
The poem create vision of fire. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Amanda]

This poem reminds me of a phoenix.I love the first five lines the most. Nicely written!