what if i told you

What if I told you tomorrow

will never come for me

 

what if today you only had

one more day with me left?

 

I could get hit walking down the street,

be in a car crash and burn in a building of fire?

 

What would you tell me

before i met my fate?

 

I could be lost forever

would it even matter?

 

Would you tell me all

the things that would matter?

 

If you know tomorrow

i would never be anymore?

 

What would you say

if you only had one more day?

 

Author's Note

I beeing playing around with this for while now, i worked on it and here you go. please tell me what you think. This is not about me dying or aleast i hope not. But the big question of this poem is What If?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A last day of life would need some fun and some requests of forgiveness. This is one of the great questions. Good to enjoy each day of life. Never know when the day is our last. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Shay]

Its really nicely done, I like it

[Mockingbird]

these are questions i'd rather not think about. i can understand someone asking these questions but i would want to know why anyone would ask such depressing questions.

[darkness*star1985]

This poem is about a last chance to say how you feel about someone or ask them before tomorrow, No one knows if tomorrow will even be their. its not for every one poem, but it plays with the mind and ask the big what if questions. Thank you for your review.

[Dark and Mysterious]

This is a questions I've too toyed with for a while. Have also asked a few close ones too. Shouldn't we enjoy each day like it's the last but too much time is spent wallowing and wanting. We forget the small things in life that matter. Good work.

[Kaela]

I wish more people would take questions like this more seriously. This is definitely a conversation piece. Congrats on making readers think.

[Harishvarmaa]

This is so poignant! When I read this I could visualize my girl friend before me.. really a nice write filled with the understandable emotions..

[Amanda]

I liked the first and last stanza the bessst. It was nicely written and makes the reader think. Good work!

[Skye]

I love this, i really really do. The ending is just perfect.

The only thing I have to say is, the two lines before the end, I didn't understand. 'I would never me anymore'. Could you explain it?

[darkness*star1985]

it is supposed to be I would never be anymore, i will make that correction here in a min. but thank you for your review