If this is to much too ask

If this is to much too ask

A Poem by darkness*star1985

hold my hand,

kiss my cheeks,

brush my hair out of my face,

walk hand and hand,

not front or behind,

lift me up when i can't reach,

whispers of sweet nothings in my ear,

wake up beautiful is what i should hear.

 

 

 Controller in my hand,

smile when saying I love you,

tickles and chases around the house,

laughter echo bounds of the walls,

open car doors,

flowers on any day of the week,

sweet songs of love and beautiful fill around the home.

Protection when we sleep,

strong hands to hold,

when horror on the screen.

 

If this is much to ask,

then back to my fantasy world I go.

© 2012 darkness*star1985


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I believe true love allowed us to be kind and show appreciation of love. Your wishes are simple and when love is near. Sweet words of love and be kind to your lover should be the only goal. I like the description and the direction of the poem. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


this was great and i think everyone deserves this at least i know i want this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


i'm a cynic, so i'd prefer to go to my fantasy world. great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


AW So sweet. Such an amazing poem. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Keep writing :) You deserve this

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the last two lines, breathtaking :) Amazing poem

Posted 12 Years Ago



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