sunlight.

probably really cheese poem but i need a break from depressed, mad and sad poems for a awhile

Sunlight bathe me in

my skin drinks it in

filling me with light

no more clouds at nights

 

Sunlight took

the darkness way

it filled me with joy

sunlight sun bright

oh what a sight

 

Sunlight never leave

you make me smile

even blue birds

sing your song

 

 

Thank you sunlight

you save my life

because you

shine your light

this morning.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the description and the desire of the poem. A new day bring hope and possibilities. I like the use of the sunlight to make your point in this poem. A very nice ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Shay]

The wording is really good and your poem was very pleasant to read

[darkness*star1985]

thank you

[Raven Starhawk]

This reminds me of someone very special in my life. She is my sunlight. It feels so good to have such a person in your life.

[darkness*star1985]

Thank you

[Ashley]

i love that reading it makes me smile. i think some days we all need to be reminded that sunlight is a gift in itself and that it's worth thanking

[darkness*star1985]

Thank you

[Corset]

oh wow, i love this one, great job, nothing like a little light to dispel the doom and gloom.

[darkness*star1985]

Thank you

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

AMAZING!!!! that is all i have to say

[Mockingbird]

thankfully we all have days like this though not often. cute poem.

[Annabelle Lee]

this is a poem that i would read when somebody made me angry, juust happy and easy going. Way to go

[Amanda]

This is a happy poem. Nicely written. I'm glad you found hope. Keep writing :)

[Dean Kuch®]

Nothin' like a ray of sunshine to brighten up our day. Sunshine is a gift and a tangible presentation of hope and inspiration.
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